Jumat, 26 Desember 2008

Opal Ashwinder part 4

He surprised looking at the new-look Kina. ‘You changed a lot, Kina. You are more… well more. By the way, what are you doing here?’ ‘I’m going to help you, of course.’ ‘But how do you know I was here?’ ‘I saw your giant dragon flying above the woods, so I came here to meet you. And now I am.’ ‘how do you know it’s my dragon?’ ‘In the bar, I disguised as a caped man. I saw you shooting knife-like paper to break the bottles, and I saw you fighting my butler, Graben Freist.’ ‘That’s your butler? Oh, I’m sorry that I killed your butler.’ ‘Hey, a butler is hard to kill you know.’ Then there’s a sound beyond the woods. Kina is hiding behind Opal. ‘C’mon! I’m not afraid!’ Opal shouted. ‘Mistress Kina? Is that you?’ the sound came from the thing. ‘Graben? Is that you?’ said Kina. And then, a big man came out. ‘Mistress Kina! I’m glad to found you!’ said Graben. ‘Hey, you’re that guy in the bar that I killed!’ ‘A butler is hard to kill you know.’ Answered Graben. He’s different between in the bar and now. Now he’s using black clothes. All black. Except the hair. And the skin. The hair is a little white because the age. And the skin is white. ‘I thought you were bad.’ He chuckles then. Graben laughs a little. ‘Now, back to the problem. Brothwell village is under attack because of me. We must fight it. But the three of us cannot defeat them alone. There are thousands of them. We needed allies. Many other magical things. But where?’ he confused. ‘I know where to go.’ Someone or something answered. ‘Who’s there?’ ‘Don’t worry, I’m a dwarf. My name is Flawq Ferdas. You can call me Ferd.’ ‘Ferd… where are you?’ ‘Below you!’ Opal jumped, surprised. Opal jumped back. From Opal standing before, a head came out. And then the head jumped. After he landed, Opal glad because seeing a dwarf that can show the way out. Ferd is short, about one meter, have a beard, and fat. ‘We should go to Dasr Leonnyl. Many magical thing lives there. Me too.’ ‘Okay, let’s go!’ ‘But there’s a price.’ ‘Okay, what is it?’ ‘A meteor rock.’ ‘METEOR ROCK?’
TO BE CONTINUED.........................................
(sorry for the mistakes, thx)

Selasa, 16 Desember 2008

Opal Ashwinder part 3

Part 2: THE KINGDOM’S ATTACK


Pithec bar, west brothwell village

Opal grew into a handsome boy. He’s kind, always wanted to help others. He has black-violet hair, with blue eyes, it’s the perfect match. It makes him so handsome. ‘Happy birthday Opal, happy birthday Opal, happy birthday dear Opal, happy birthday to you!’ Opal’s parent’s sang. ‘oh, thank you mom and dad!’ he hugged them very tight. ‘Here’s your cake,’ his mom opened a box that contains a chocolate cake, Opal’s favorite cake. ‘and this is your presents.’ His mom continued. ‘Thank you!’ said Opal. He opened the littlest present, because he’s curious. He surprised, because what’s inside is a ring. A blue diamond ring and that’s rare and very expensive. ‘Who is this from?’ he asked. ‘It’s from Kina. Kina Calomel, remember?’ ‘Oh, I remember her. She’s the king’s daughter, and also my best friend.’ ‘You should thank to her. She’s very kind.’ ‘I will, Mom.’ And then, his father’s turn to speak. ‘Opal, we need to tell you something. Something important.’ ‘What is it, Dad?’ ‘When you’re still a baby, I found you in the woods of Artol. And strangely, you were covered by paper shaped like an armor, and guarded by two paper wolves. And I realize that you are a mutant. And that arm shield you wear, it’s not just hand shield, it’s an arm shield that can minimize your power to zero percent, to help you to be look like a normal person. But, it only covers you power until your age is eleven. And you are. So the arm shield are going to leave your arm very soon.’ And after that, the arm shield removes by itself. ‘See? I told you.’ Said his father. ‘maybe I am a mutant! Can I control papers?’ ‘Yes, you can. But concentrate. Can you see that bottles? Aim your hand and concentrate.’ He aim his hand, concentrate, and then a sharp paper came out from his hand. A very sharp paper. And suddenly, the paper fly by itself and hit the bottles. The bottles crush and broke. ‘What the… you have to pay for that!’ said a very big and strong-like man. ‘Don’t worry. I’ll protect you.’ A little thing became a great fight. And then, Opal aim his hand to him. But the papers are not like last time. It is bigger, sharper and many. It shoots like a machine gun. And the papers hit the man’s chest. Blood flowing on his body. And then he died. ‘You can control it fast, young boy.’ His father said. And after that, there’s a sound outside. Horses tap. And who’s riding it, is the nightmare. ‘Run, Opal, RUN!’ his father shouted. ‘but how about you all?’ ‘we’ll be safe. Now, GO!’ Opal ran. ‘Why am I running? I can make a dragon to ride!’ he concentrated, and suddenly, papers coming out from his hands, forming a three dimensional dragon. With a saddle, of course. He ride it, and he fly to the sky. He stare at the woods of Artol. That’s a safe place to hide, he said in his mind. When he fly, archers shooting at him. He get shot many times, so the dragon cannot fly anymore. Oh, NO! I’m going to crash! In his mind. He crashed on the woods. When he land, the dragon break into pieces of paper, and the paper rushed back to his hand. He walks deeper to the woods. The deeper, the better hiding place. He walks backside because he is curious to his village’s destiny when he left. He walk deeper, and then he crashed a person. He screamed very loud. ‘shih! You don’t want the kingdom’s army found you, right? So be quiet!’ she said. ‘You be careful… KINA?’
TO BE CONTINUED.........................................
(sorry for the mistakes, thx)