Artemis’s castle, north brothwell village
‘What are you doing here? Get out from here! Now!’ said guardian number one. ‘Yeah, get out from here or we release our army just to torture and cage you.’ Said guardian number two. ‘Wait. I am the most trusted man from the king’s eye and heart. I wanted to see my big brother, King Artemis Calomel.’ ‘Oh yeah? Do you think I can be fooled by a villager? I don’t think so. If you’re the king’s little brother, you must have the same family name. Now, what’s your name?’ ‘Why, my name is Neville Calomel, of course.’ ‘Oh, I know that’s a fake…‘ ‘What is going on down there?’ An echoing voice comes from inside the castle. A tapping voice comes closer and closer. And then the king arrived. ‘What is going on here?’ asked the king. ‘Forgive me your highness, but this man pretending that he is your little brother, Neville Calomel.’ Explains the guardian. The king looked at Neville’s face. And then the king realized that he is Neville Calomel. ‘Neville!’ said the king. ‘Artemis!’ Neville answered. ‘It’s a long time I didn’t see you. Look at you! Now you have a beard!’ the king shocked. ‘Look at yourself, old brother. You’ve become a very kind king! And you’ve grown a beard too! We look like the same, aren’t we, guardians?’ asked Neville. ‘Huh, what? Oh yes, you all look like twins.’ Said guardian number one. ‘You don’t want us to be executed, right?’ asked the guardian number two. ‘Don’t worry, because I will.’ Said Artemis. And then the guardian’s face turned into weird. And then the king laughed. ‘What’s so funny, your majesty?’ asked guardian number one. ‘You! Did you think I’m serious? Of course not! You’re new in here! I’m not going to execute you! But I’ll give you a second chance. If you do that again, I’ll execute you.’ Said the king. ‘Oh, bless your heart, your majesty!’ ‘Yes, thank you my lord!’ they said. ‘Yes, you’re welcome.’ The king answered. And then the guardians rushed inside the castle. ‘Man, I’ve missed you so much!’ ‘Yeah, me too. Now back to the topic. We must sort it as a very secret message. We must talk it inside the castle. Oh yeah, have you got any wife?’ ‘Yes, I have. Her name is Dianne Gregory, now she is Dianne Calomel. I have one daughter too. She’s born five days ago. I named her Kina Calomel. Good name huh?’ ‘Yes, a very good name.’ ‘Now, let’s go inside my humble castle. Hey, that rhymes!’ said the king. Inside the castle, Neville watched the walls closely. There are painting, war armors, and many expensive things. The wall is full by paintings of the ancestors. ‘It must be good to be a king. And, you must be rich, too.’ Said Neville. The king stopped walking. ‘Oh, I get it.’ ‘you want me to lend some of my money to you right?’ asked the king. ‘Well, my business is a bit down, so…’ ‘Yeah, yeah, I know. I’ll give you money as much as you want.’ ‘Oh, thank you!’ When they arrived at the throne room, Neville explained the bad news. ‘Brother, I have a bad news. There was a mutant baby in the south of the village. It’s in the Ashwinder’s house, my brother.’ ‘What! A mutant baby is in the village? We must find him and kill him!!!’ ‘But when, brother, when?’ ‘we’ll kill him. If he is eleven years old. Let’s see how he likes it to be killed and dead!’ said the king. ‘And my money, big brother?’ ‘How many kilograms of twenty-four karat gold do you want?’ asked the king. ‘I want five hundred kilograms of twenty-four karat gold!’ ‘Very well then. Waiter! Send five hundred kilograms of twenty-four karat gold to his house! Immediately!’ ‘Y…yes, y… y… your ma… majesty! R… right a… away s… s… sir!’ the waiter rushed to the gold room. ‘Thank you for your information, little brother! I will make a war direction!’ ‘you’re welcome, your majesty.’ Said Neville. Neville rushed towards the front gate. And then he stopped. And then he giggled. From that giggle now comes the evil laugh. ‘just wait, Ashwinders! Eleven years later, your body will be burned and turned into ash!!!’ said Neville happily. After that laugh water falling from the sky. It’s raining.
Ashwider’s house, south brothwell village
Opal Ashwinder is sleeping very calm. He is holding a teddy bear. His face is so cute that can’t make you resist holding him all the time. Opal’s parents discussing about Opal’s future. Because the discussion takes a long time, they didn’t realize the time. ‘Holy crap! It’s midnight! You must take a rest, dear.’ ‘you too, honey.’ Belinda answered. They slept very calm, because he don’t know that eleven years later, a nightmare is going to happen in Opal Ashwinder’s life.
‘What are you doing here? Get out from here! Now!’ said guardian number one. ‘Yeah, get out from here or we release our army just to torture and cage you.’ Said guardian number two. ‘Wait. I am the most trusted man from the king’s eye and heart. I wanted to see my big brother, King Artemis Calomel.’ ‘Oh yeah? Do you think I can be fooled by a villager? I don’t think so. If you’re the king’s little brother, you must have the same family name. Now, what’s your name?’ ‘Why, my name is Neville Calomel, of course.’ ‘Oh, I know that’s a fake…‘ ‘What is going on down there?’ An echoing voice comes from inside the castle. A tapping voice comes closer and closer. And then the king arrived. ‘What is going on here?’ asked the king. ‘Forgive me your highness, but this man pretending that he is your little brother, Neville Calomel.’ Explains the guardian. The king looked at Neville’s face. And then the king realized that he is Neville Calomel. ‘Neville!’ said the king. ‘Artemis!’ Neville answered. ‘It’s a long time I didn’t see you. Look at you! Now you have a beard!’ the king shocked. ‘Look at yourself, old brother. You’ve become a very kind king! And you’ve grown a beard too! We look like the same, aren’t we, guardians?’ asked Neville. ‘Huh, what? Oh yes, you all look like twins.’ Said guardian number one. ‘You don’t want us to be executed, right?’ asked the guardian number two. ‘Don’t worry, because I will.’ Said Artemis. And then the guardian’s face turned into weird. And then the king laughed. ‘What’s so funny, your majesty?’ asked guardian number one. ‘You! Did you think I’m serious? Of course not! You’re new in here! I’m not going to execute you! But I’ll give you a second chance. If you do that again, I’ll execute you.’ Said the king. ‘Oh, bless your heart, your majesty!’ ‘Yes, thank you my lord!’ they said. ‘Yes, you’re welcome.’ The king answered. And then the guardians rushed inside the castle. ‘Man, I’ve missed you so much!’ ‘Yeah, me too. Now back to the topic. We must sort it as a very secret message. We must talk it inside the castle. Oh yeah, have you got any wife?’ ‘Yes, I have. Her name is Dianne Gregory, now she is Dianne Calomel. I have one daughter too. She’s born five days ago. I named her Kina Calomel. Good name huh?’ ‘Yes, a very good name.’ ‘Now, let’s go inside my humble castle. Hey, that rhymes!’ said the king. Inside the castle, Neville watched the walls closely. There are painting, war armors, and many expensive things. The wall is full by paintings of the ancestors. ‘It must be good to be a king. And, you must be rich, too.’ Said Neville. The king stopped walking. ‘Oh, I get it.’ ‘you want me to lend some of my money to you right?’ asked the king. ‘Well, my business is a bit down, so…’ ‘Yeah, yeah, I know. I’ll give you money as much as you want.’ ‘Oh, thank you!’ When they arrived at the throne room, Neville explained the bad news. ‘Brother, I have a bad news. There was a mutant baby in the south of the village. It’s in the Ashwinder’s house, my brother.’ ‘What! A mutant baby is in the village? We must find him and kill him!!!’ ‘But when, brother, when?’ ‘we’ll kill him. If he is eleven years old. Let’s see how he likes it to be killed and dead!’ said the king. ‘And my money, big brother?’ ‘How many kilograms of twenty-four karat gold do you want?’ asked the king. ‘I want five hundred kilograms of twenty-four karat gold!’ ‘Very well then. Waiter! Send five hundred kilograms of twenty-four karat gold to his house! Immediately!’ ‘Y…yes, y… y… your ma… majesty! R… right a… away s… s… sir!’ the waiter rushed to the gold room. ‘Thank you for your information, little brother! I will make a war direction!’ ‘you’re welcome, your majesty.’ Said Neville. Neville rushed towards the front gate. And then he stopped. And then he giggled. From that giggle now comes the evil laugh. ‘just wait, Ashwinders! Eleven years later, your body will be burned and turned into ash!!!’ said Neville happily. After that laugh water falling from the sky. It’s raining.
Ashwider’s house, south brothwell village
Opal Ashwinder is sleeping very calm. He is holding a teddy bear. His face is so cute that can’t make you resist holding him all the time. Opal’s parents discussing about Opal’s future. Because the discussion takes a long time, they didn’t realize the time. ‘Holy crap! It’s midnight! You must take a rest, dear.’ ‘you too, honey.’ Belinda answered. They slept very calm, because he don’t know that eleven years later, a nightmare is going to happen in Opal Ashwinder’s life.
TO BE CONTINUED...............................................
(sorry for the mistakes, thx)

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ini adalah lanjutan dari cerita Opal Ashwinder, tapi belum berubah bab, karena satu bab banyak sekali! jadi tidak bisa satu posting. sorry, thx
oh iya, pergantian bab itu ditandai dengan adanya part ke berapa dan judul part itu. itu bukan di judul, tapi di cerita, OK??
maksudnya bukan di judul awal yang tulisannya warna hijaub
hijau
salah ketik
Wo... Ganti nama lagi
ada yang aneh juga masa si Opal udah 11 tahun tidur masih pake boneka ? (setara dengan kelas 5 sd semester 2 tahu)
Gw aja bikin 3 chapter cape lu yang banyak itu pasti cape
Lu juga baca Eyeshield 21 Ama D.Gray man
deh di onemanga dua-duanya bagus kok
Hi, short time not see Ione Flawks. Ini LL Yang berubah menjadi Bayou. Saya terus mendukung novel yang akan kau buat tersebut
oh ya blog gw yg kedua udah gw hapus (Koran 1000) Tapi lo blm taw kan kalo gw bikin blog baru tapi langsung diapus karena jelek
iFauzan and Friends nya mau diapain sih?
Part 3 nye mane
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